My first subbing, help please!

[rizefall]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JnjW_t1Z ... ideo_title

I was wondering if there are any errors you can find, about the timing of the text, the translation itself or just if you like it that would be awesome aswell

hope you like it!

EDIT:

Does not someone else want to give this subbing a try? I would like to see a TV-Nihon version. As i'm new to this and made it in a couple of hours then i hope it would not be a big problem for you?

[Lunagel]

hugh =/= huge

Tense errors here and there but nothing major. Make sure to double check your work.

[rizefall]

hugh =/= huge

Tense errors here and there but nothing major. Make sure to double check your work.

Ye i found one of those errors when he said "of a book" which i first spelled "ofa a book" which did sound kinda funny XD
Thanks for the input!