1) No, not because you didn't like my song, I have this tone because-
2) You can keep the same melody and, if done right, rhythm, even if you change the syllable count.
The reason for the season: The 12 Rider days of Christmas.
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Re: The reason for the season: The 12 Rider days of Christmas.
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Re: The reason for the season: The 12 Rider days of Christmas.
True.Kogashi wrote:2) You can keep the same melody and, if done right, rhythm, even if you change the syllable count.
Let us just acknowledge that we have very different views on what "done right" means.
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"Yasashiku, hageshiku, hitomi tojita nara... ai o sutete shishi to nare!"
("With tenderness, with violence, with closed eyes... cast away love and become a lion!")
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("With tenderness, with violence, with closed eyes... cast away love and become a lion!")
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Re: The reason for the season: The 12 Rider days of Christmas.
fair enough... That aside since I didn't say so the first go around, it is a good song but again... yeah it needs work...
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Re: The reason for the season: The 12 Rider days of Christmas.
Here is another few suggested changes, fitting the number theme:
One could also switch Hibiki and Kabuto around, going with the "Seven Fighting Oni" in the movie title and counting Dark Kabuto as the eighth Zecter.On the Sixth day of Christmas, the Owner gave to me
Six Imajin allies,
5-5-5!
Four Riders Ace, V3 Kick, two Hopper Riders, and a Black Sun to set the world free!
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On the Eighth Day of Christmas, Hibiki gave to me
Eight Fighting Oni, Seven Insect Zectors, Six Imajin allies,
5-5-5!
Four Riders Ace, V3 Kick, 2 Hopper Riders, and a Black Sun to set the world free!
- Spectrum
"Yasashiku, hageshiku, hitomi tojita nara... ai o sutete shishi to nare!"
("With tenderness, with violence, with closed eyes... cast away love and become a lion!")
- Rio
"Yasashiku, hageshiku, hitomi tojita nara... ai o sutete shishi to nare!"
("With tenderness, with violence, with closed eyes... cast away love and become a lion!")
- Rio