Kamen Rider Double-O: Shin Riders Vs. Great Leader

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Kamen Rider Double-O: Shin Riders Vs. Great Leader

Post by netro32 » Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:31 pm

Hey guys. I've been working on a fanfic, and I would really like some feedback. Here is a synopsis of it from my journal on deviant art:

Kamen Rider Double-O: Shin Riders Vs. Great Leader starts immediately after the end of the Decade and Double movie. So here is a quick synopsis of the beginning.

Tsukasa and the rest of the Decade series are traveling across the universes, until the Decade Driver and DiEnd Driver begin to go berserk. In the process of a battle, Decade and friends get teleported back to Tsukasa's world. There he sees his house in ruins, and his sister injured. Tsukasa runs to his sister, to see if she could explain what happened, only to point at the dark figure known as Great Leader.

Tsukasa is puzzled by this, considering that in his world, he was Great Leader. This is when Great Leader explains that after the events of Kamen Rider J, he attempted to conquer the world one last time, but was unable to win due to all 15 riders up to that point. In order to escape destruction, Great Leader used a prototype dimension item to slip out of that universe (this idea will change but eh). To Great Leader's surprise, he fell into a unique pocket of time and space, which was giving birth to new worlds. First world he visited, he came across the real World of Kuuga, staying there till the time KR: Agito had replaced Kuuga. There he visited the other worlds until finally he came across a unique world. This world would be known as the world of Decade.

After spending so much time witnessing the Heisei riders, and there powers, he hoped that he could absorb and create a rider to defeat all others. But Great Leader feared that this rider, or any rider may come to defeat him. So once again he created Dai-Shocker, and placed Tsukasa as Great Leader. (This will explain why Decade had all 10 rider cards.) In the process of planning how to defeating all riders, Dai-Shocker creates the Decade and DiEnd Drivers.

After the events of All Riders vs. Dai-Shocker, Great Leader immediately took action. He began to develop a new belt, like decades. Here he and Tsukasa henshin and begin to fight, but only for Decade to lose immediately. Yuusuke tries to fight but Great Leader summons the real Godai Yuusuke to fight him and defeats AU Kuuga. DiEnd also feels the wrath of Great Leader and is tossed into another AU. After this, Decade's defeat, Great Leader absorbs all of Decades powers and cards, into his drive, making him the true ultimate rider. The problem that arrives from this is that the backlash of energy of decades belt cracking and releasing all that energy, causes alternate Universes that had no riders, to gain riders, and locking out all the other riders.

Here the story will move to Double-O and how he gained his power. His universe will be one of the few truly affected by Great Leader directly. With this story I hope to incorporate all OC riders on deviant art and HJU. The point of all these riders are to help fight Great Leader. Double-O is by no means the leader of the new AU riders.

Here is a link to the first fanfic: http://netro32.deviantart.com/#/d2z5adz

Sorry for the grammer errors, I dont have people to read over my stuff.

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Post by Areku The O.F. » Sun Sep 26, 2010 5:18 pm

I can make a manga out of your story if you want to.
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Post by netro32 » Sun Sep 26, 2010 6:44 pm

Areku The O.F. wrote:I can make a manga out of your story if you want to.
You sure you want to take the task to work on it? Right now only four episodes are up. Even at that, I do have some external help with characters.

Its up to you if you want to.
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Post by Areku The O.F. » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:03 pm

Give me a description of how the characters look like (aside of the obvious ones of course) to get me going. Let's make one badass looking rider.

Edit:
I'm starting some sketches based on your artwork on Devian Art, I'll post something as soon as I finish.
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Post by netro32 » Mon Sep 27, 2010 3:01 pm

Give me time. Right now I'm job hunting, plus I am working on Episode , Double-O's other forms, and Stingray disk. So it will be awhiile.
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